East Java is a province in eastern of Java Island. East Java has many things to be proud of. One of them is the tribes. There are many traditional tribes who live in East Java. Those tribes are Tengger, Madura, Java, and so on. Tengger people who live around Bromo Mountain have annual traditional ceremony called Kasada. It is held in order to show their grateful to their God for their successful harvest. They bring some of their crops such as rice plant, banana, cassava, and so on to the Bromo’s crater. This is an interesting ceremony. Besides the ceremony itself, we can enjoy the magnificent scenery of Mount Bromo, especially in sunrise. Red, orange, and yellow colors are perfectly mixed into wonderful color. Its beauty has been famous in the world.
Madura people who mostly live in Madura Island, has an interesting traditional bull race. It is called “Karapan Sapi”. Karapan Sapi involves one man who rides two bulls in both of his side. The race is held in a wide area. The fastest team is the winner. Besides Karapan Sapi, Madura people also have their famous Batik Madura. Batik is a cloth with unique motif made by hand. Batik Madura is attractive in color such as light red or yellow. Many tourists buy Batik Madura as souvenirs.
Talking about East Java has no ends. There are still many traditional tribes with their unique customs and cultures. Its beaches and mountains are too beautiful to be ignored and its traditional foods are just too delicious to be unnoticed. Only one word I can say about East Java: FASCINATING!
hy damasti.....
ReplyDeleteThis is my comment
I think your writing is good enough
But rather than in Madura it wear blaster clothes.
Not batik madura
Because I know if Batik has made Pekalongan,not Madura.
i think your paragraph is good enough .
ReplyDeleteyou describe more details about how east java civilization look .
keep in good writing .
Your writing it's so great,..
ReplyDeleteyou write specific enough,..
but,you tell about two object,.Bromo and Madura
you should tell just one,..
thanks for your comment,..
Elok Lailiya (120810486G)
your writing is pretty good and interest to read,,
ReplyDeletei agree with you about east java,,,it's very FASCINATING and ENCHANTMENT........if we talk about east java,,,there is no ending in that story...
But, ithink if you tells about Fascinating,,you
have to tells not only the tribes,,,but another fascinating in Java,,at least two...
so the readers more knowing and fascinate about east java..
:)
by: Karina.R
Hi.. Damasti!!! :)
ReplyDeleteI think your paragraph is good enough..
So interesting and you describe your writing so clearly too..
Be a good writer :)
Commented by : Pratiwi Ramandita 120810487G
Good afternoon damasti
ReplyDeleteYour paragraph is good, the Topis sentence and suporting sentence have been connected
but, it will be better if explanation about tengger is not include with paragraph of general explanation in the begining.
Perhaps, you can take it in new paragraph.
I think enough..thank..
Please comment me back
by: Juwaratu (120810478g)
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i think your paragraph is enoug good
ReplyDeletebut it will be better if you describe about a special place that interesting in East Java
i hope you will edit your paragraph again...
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ReplyDeleteBy : Yulia Primita Sari
ReplyDelete(120810494G)
I think your paragraph so far so good and you described two places clearly......
Then, your topic sentence is ok.
about your grammar, I think good enough.
- I hope, you comment my blog please........
@ Ria : Madura has batik too. not only Pekalongan :)
ReplyDelete@ Ranti : thanks :)
@ Elok : yes. because i only emphasized in two famous traditional tribes in east java, which are Tengger and Madura
@ Karina : see my topic sentence. i only want to emphasized in traditional tribes in east Java. but i think i have to renew the title if so.
@ Pratiwi : thanks :)
@ Juwaratu : okay ;)
@ Aisyah : Bromo mountain and Madura are pretty ineresting, aren't they?
@ Yulia : thanks :)
I think your writing is quite good..
ReplyDeleteYou described about East Java with easy understanding language.
But, If u tell us about interesting place in Madura, I think it will be more interesting, so You dont just tell about the culture...
Hmm..
So far yours is good..
That's all from me...
Hello.......
ReplyDeleteAhaaa...so many your friend give comment in your blog, allow me to join too.
Your describe is so good. I don't know, you ever go there or yet. But you can describe clearly.
Ok. I think that all my commets and see U again.
By Heri Purwanto (120810484G)
I interested with your paragraph,,,,
ReplyDeleteyou can explain your topic as good as possible,.,
:)